Phew, too many tears! Oh dear, that was poignant. Bravo!
I'm so impressed by these amazing, elaborate characterizations, and the way the plot falls in line perfectly with canon. It's simply gorgeous how you've written Pomona and Alice's love, and the pain that Pomona endures both from losing Alice and from finding her again in Neville.
This is so well done, a dazzling tale that's all the better for having been told by someone with so much talent. Really, if I gushed as much as I'd like... I'd absolutely embarrass myself.