Oh my squee, this is fabulous! *flaps and flaps, and flaps some more* I just love all of this. Poor, poor Flint, being a house elf--that must have been so demoralising. I absolutely adore the idea of Dudley working as a bouncer, and looming!Severus is just perfect. I really like your Harry here as well. And--hee!--the more in depth interview sounds like just the thing they both need.
Brilliant work, and thank you heaps for sharing this!