I enjoyed this interesting and well-characterized journey through Molly's life; you've created a full and believable story for her, one that really brings her into her own. I like the way you peel back the layers, with our picture of everyone -- Molly's parents, Rufus, the brothers, the Hogwarts classmates -- becoming more complex as the story progresses. I'm glad Molly is so steadfast in following her own path despite her hateful parents and the pressures of her background.