Hot Dudley/Millie - who would have thought it? Well done, Mystery Author! The glimpse we get into their domestic arrangements is cute and original. I'm very taken with nanny!Goyle. :-) I love the idea of Millicent as a magical barrister, and a Dudley involved in sports broadcasting makes enormous sense. It's fun to watch him assimilating into the magical world, and so sad to see Vernon and Petunia separating themselves from their child and grandchild (and Millie's parents too, though we don't really know them, united with their Muggle counterparts in this, unfortunately), still refusing to accept what is. But it's wonderful to see them so completely in love with one another and happy in spite of their parents' silliness. A charming read!