I enjoyed this thoroughly - thank you! In particular, Greg's inner voice stood out for me, with all his almost quaint swear words and self-deprecation really bringing the character to life. I thought his statement that 'He'd been the first of their lot to really fall in love', did no end to show that he is clever emotionally, if not book-smart.
The conversation with Harry ending in a toast to 'difficult men' was pitch-perfect, and the sex very hot, when it arrived. Brava!