Oh, this is really good. The voices are spot-on, and they make a good pair, these two. I especially love the description of how Percy sees the Burrow, that he feels so disconnected from it, and has to just keep walking to be able to make it there. It's nicely poignant and true to Percy's character. George's encouragement made me smile. All the characters seem very much themselves, and yet also more mature (as they should be at their age), which is hard to pull off in post-series stories, but it's perfectly handled here. Good stuff.
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