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Beth H ([info]bethbethbeth) wrote in [info]hp_beholder,
@ 2012-04-24 13:01:00

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Entry tags:beholder_2012, femslash, fic, galatea merrythought, griselda marchbanks, merrythought/marchbanks, rating:pg

FIC: "Not Exactly the First Blush of Youth" for chantefable
Recipient: [info]chantefable
Author: ???
Title: Not Exactly the First Blush of Youth
Rating: PG
Pairings: Galatea Merrythought/Griselda Marchbanks
Word Count: ~2650
Warnings/Content Information (Highlight to View): *A bit of graphic detail of dismemberment*.
Summary: Galatea Merrythought may be seventy-two years old, but she's not without the ability to be useful.
Author's Notes: My deepest thanks to my beta, who will be credited after reveals, and to [info]chantefable, who inspired me to write about characters I had never before even considered. Thank you!




Galatea ducked down behind the stone wall just before the world exploded in a burst of green sparks. Her back twinged in protest even as shards of the wall rained down on her, tearing through the top layer of her cloak.

"Renew that protection charm, Merrythought!" Griselda shouted from her vantage point behind a rapidly-dwindling oak. "All the trinkets in the world won't save you from a direct blast."

"Trinkets, she calls them," Galatea muttered, the sound washed away by the explosions taking place around her. "See if I save her sorry arse." Impervious to the contradiction of thought to deed, Galatea chose a vial at random from the five strapped to her waist and tossed it in the direction of their attackers.

Quick wand work delineated the area around the dark wizards so that when the noxious potion burst from its vial and filled the air with fumes, they didn't affect anyone from her team.

A mirroring spell put the image of herself in the open to draw any lingering fire, and after ten seconds of quiet, Galatea used the wall to aid her in climbing to her feet, then calmly dusted debris from her trousers. "Adams?"

"You don't think you could have used that sooner?" Michael Adams asked, limping toward her while trying to perform a tricky bit of self-healing on his shoulder. Galatea brushed his hands away, tending to the injury herself.

"Marchbanks stayed in my line of sight," Galatea inclined her head toward Griselda, who appeared to have just sat down to tea with the Minister himself, "but I didn't see Phillips get off."

"He used the confusion of the ambush to Apparate." Michael's calm sounded far too forced, understandable due to his long partnership with Quenton Phillips.

"How much time will your little bomb afford us before they wake?" Griselda asked, her wand trained on the copse of trees just ahead of them on the country lane.

Galatea pressed around the burn mark on Michael's shoulder, reading the efficacy of her burn salve and healing spells in his lack of tension. Repairing both the cloth of his shirt as well as renewing the protection charms woven into the fabric, she said, "We've at least another ten minutes."

"Good. Adams, search the bodies and snap their wands. We'll provide cover."

"Tracking spells too?"

Griselda took a moment to consider that before nodding. "We know where their nest is, but it won't hurt."

As soon as Michael stepped beyond the tree line, Galatea used the outermost trees to hang a high-level shielding spell. "That should hold until he's done."

Griselda's arms wrapped around her from behind, and Galatea relaxed back into them.

"I think my heart stopped when that wall exploded." Griselda's lips pressed against the skin of Galatea's neck, tickling as she spoke. "Who knew two seconds could last a lifetime?"

Turning, Galatea cupped Griselda's age-lined face in her hands. "I had far more protection than you did. You must do a better job of choosing your cover during firefights. I didn't leave my post at Hogwarts just to watch you die."

"You left your post at Hogwarts to help bring an end to this bloody war. But I appreciate the sentiment."

The clearing of a throat reminded them both of Michael's presence and caused them to draw apart. "If you've finished, ah, checking one another for damage, we've a manticore preserve to save."

Griselda shuddered. "Manticores. Whatever could Grindelwald want with those horrible creatures?"

"Besides their stings and skin? Hmm, no idea."

Griselda rewarded her sarcasm with a withering glare. "As soon as we get the Apparation coordinates from Phillips, we'll leave. I don't relish feeling the sting of a manticore first-hand."

Michael's face lit up with a grin. "You mean these coordinates?" he asked, waving his wand to produce a series of letters and numbers that lingered in the air for a moment.

~*~


Galatea stared around her at the destruction of the preserve. The low murmuring of the manticores sent shivers down her spine, but she ignored them. They were the least of her worries. The Muggle-repelling charms had been blown to hell, and it was only a matter of time before one of the Muggles' bomb-dropping aeroplanes took notice of the preserve.

"What are our orders?"

"The Ministry is sending a team of charms experts to do the heavy work. We're meant only to secure the manticores and ready their handlers for transport to St Mungos." Griselda sounded as overwhelmed as Galatea felt, but they both squared their shoulders and turned toward the enclosures that held all but two of the manticores. The remaining two were in hospital, one a breeding mother, the other having been wounded in the attack on the preserve. Its tail had been cut from its body and the manticore had nearly bled to death before Michael found it and staunched the bleeding.

From a distance, with a spell. Galatea hadn't taught Adams to be stupid, after all.

"When we're done here," Galatea said, "I'm going home and drawing the hottest bath I can stand."

"I think I'll join you."

Galatea raised her eyebrows and smiled. "It's been a while since we've shared."

"Decades, probably. But we've more than earned it."

"Merrythought!"

Galatea looked up, shielding her eyes from the glare of the sun until she saw Quenton Phillips standing on the rise of a hill. "What is it?" she called back.

"Can you spare a moment? There's a wounded handler who needs some emergency field healing that's a bit beyond my capabilities."

Almost before the words were out of his mouth, Galatea was standing beside Quenton, having Apparated the distance between them. "What's the condition?"

"It's bad. His arm has been severed."

Galatea made a quick mental inventory of the potions and medicines in the shrunken battlefield kit attached to her belt. "Manticore bite? I don't know that I have anything to help with that."

"No, it appears to have been cut off by one of Grindelwald's followers. Grab on. I'll side-along us to the hospital." Quenton didn't give her any more warning than that; Galatea didn't need it.

When the world re-focused, the sterile environment of a hospital surrounded her. "Which bed?" she asked.

Three beds were occupied; Quenton pointed at the one closest to the fireplace. Galatea hurried toward it, pulling out her field kit and returning it to normal size. When she reached the bed, she nearly dropped the whole thing. The deathly pale face of the boy on the bed was far too familiar. She could all too easily imagine his blood-soaked handler's uniform to be the black robes of a Hogwarts student.

"Kettleburn!"

Silvanus Kettleburn's eyelids flickered before slowly opening. "Professor Merrythought?" he asked, his voice hoarse with pain.

"No longer a professor, my boy," Galatea said, attempting a reassuring smile even as she surveyed the damage to his arm. The flesh appeared to have been chewed away rather than sliced. Turning to Quenton, who'd followed her across the room, she asked, "Are you certain a wizard did this?"

The answer, when it came, was from Kettleburn. "I'm positive."

Galatea shook her head, tsking at him. "Don't try to speak. Phillips, if you'd be so good as to firecall St Mungos?"

"Can he floo in his condition?"

"Of course he can," Galatea said, not wanting to mention in Kettleburn's hearing that the only other option was death. "Strapping young lad like this? A bit of long-distance floo travel would be nothing to him."

Kettleburn's remaining hand came up, weakly grasping at her arm. "Will they be able to regrow it?"

"Would you rather hear the harsh truth or a lovely bit of fiction?"

"Truth."

"I don't know." When he stirred himself to argue, Galatea silenced him with a spell. "I'm not lying to you. I honestly don't know. It will depend on what the wizard who did this used. Was it a spell? Just nod, my boy. You really don't need to be taxing yourself right now."

One of the other injured handlers spoke up then. "He cut off its tail and used the spike. Just sawed away at Silva's arm until he reached bone. And then he..." The handler swallowed hard. "He snapped the bone in half. I'll never forget the sound it made."

Placing her hands flat on the bed, Galatea closed her eyes and drew three deep breaths, letting them out slowly to stop the involuntary reaction of her body to that tale. "How are you still alive?" she whispered, opening her eyes again to stare into the face of the young man who'd been such a hellion in her classes just a handful of years before.

"They'd already removed the venom. There weren't any reason to take the tail, really. They got buckets of venom, but this wizard... he wanted trophies. He took a tail and Silva's hand."

"And they call the manticores monsters," Quenton said, placing a hand on her shoulder. "St Mungos is prepared. They've asked that we place him under stasis for transport."

"How..."

"I'll go with him to direct him through the interchanges and make sure he gets out at the right floo."

Galatea nodded and was about to perform the stasis spell when Kettleburn grabbed for her again. She removed the silencing spell and waited for him to speak.

"I won't be a handler anymore, will I?"

"If they can regrow your hand, anything is possible. But if not...?" She shook her head.

His eyes closed with an expression of pain that had little to do with his arm. "It's all I'm good for," he said, his voice thick. "I've never wanted to do anything else."

Galatea wasn't the sort to offer false hope, but a helping hand was another matter entirely. "Headmaster Dippet is in need of a new Care of Magical Creatures teacher. You'll have to give up the more dangerous aspects of your current job, but you'll still be able to be around the animals you love. And you'll teach the students to love them as well."

"Assuming he'd hire me. He didn't exactly enjoy my stay last time I was at Hogwarts."

"You're no longer the reckless boy you were in school, I'm sure," Galatea said, then placed her fingers over his mouth to stop whatever his reply would have been. "No more. I'm going to put you under now. When you wake, you'll be in St Mungos. And I'll instruct Headmaster Dippet to call on you at his earliest convenience."

After casting the stasis spell, Galatea watched as Quenton entered the floo with Kettleburn's unconscious body and twirled away in the green flames. As soon as they were gone, she upended the flimsy metal hospital bed with a shout of fury.

Familiar arms came around her for the second time that day. "Hush, my love. You'll scare the manticore handlers." Griselda applied pressure to Galatea's shoulders until she turned, then they locked arms around each other. "We're done here. Michael will see to transporting everyone to safety. You and I are for home, love, and that hot bath."

Galatea sank into Griselda's embrace, and the comfort of her understanding.

~*~


Water sluiced over her head, rinsing the suds from her hair. Griselda's body was a soft cushion at her back.

"And has today made you regret your choice?"

Galatea shifted in the tub. "Hmmm? Which choice? Joining the war effort?"

"In part. Mostly, though, I meant leaving your position at Hogwarts."

Galatea thought about that for a moment—Griselda's courage in asking deserved a considered response. "No. Nothing has really changed. I'm tired of teaching."

"There will be more days like today if you stay with the effort."

"True, but... Do you know why I stopped teaching?"

Griselda's fingers traced a vein in Galatea's arm. "I thought it was to do with the tragedy of last term."

"Myrtle's death was more of a final straw than the actual impetus behind my retirement. Defense is for the young, Griselda. At least, that's what the young believe. When you reach a certain age, and you stand before a classroom of teenagers who barely know the business end of a wand from its grip, though... They start to give you a look. It's less about boredom and more about pity. They look at you and no longer see you as a pool of knowledge from which they might drink. They simply see you as old and slow and beyond your prime."

"Did they injure your feelings?"

Galatea slapped Griselda with the wash cloth. "Shut it, you."

Water trickled down Galatea's chest, chased by Griselda's fingers. When they found her breast, they squeezed, and it wasn't the firm grip of a young woman. Nor the firm breast of one. "We are old, though, Gala. Seventy-two isn't exactly the first blush of youth."

"'Old' and 'without use' are not synonymous. We proved that today." Galatea raised her hand from the water and covered Griselda's with it. "And age has its benefits," she said, relaxing into Griselda's touch while allowing her hands to do some wandering of their own.

~*~


"Are you certain I can't tempt you to return?" Headmaster Dippet asked, pouring more wine into his goblet.

"Not a chance. The war may be done, but I'm not fool enough to take up the teaching robes again."

"Thank the gods for Albus Dumbledore. And your instruction of him, my dear. No one will forget that it was you who taught him everything he knows."

"Everyone will forget, is what you mean. It's no matter, though. Hundreds of students passed through my classes. I can't take credit for everything they do or have done."

"We're alone, my dear; of course you can."

Galatea covered the mouth of her goblet when Dippet moved to pour again. "No, thank you. And I suppose a bit of congratulations are in order for us. The entire war effort would surely have crumbled without our side having been taught by... well, by us."

"To us," Dippet said, laughing as he raised his goblet and took a long swallow.

"To us," Galatea answered before draining her wine.

"And what's to become of you now? The war's done, but for the cleaning up. A new generation of professors have arrived to torment all future students. Thank you, by the way, for directing the Kettleburn boy to me. What will you do with yourself now?"

"With Grindelwald imprisoned, his followers will be more active. I expect several attempts on Nurmengard in the next few weeks. That will keep Griselda and I occupied for a while. After that... who knows? Perhaps I'll join her on the board of the Wizarding Examination Authority. They always need extra examiners in the practical subjects."

"No political aspirations?"

"The Wizengamot, you mean? Heavens, no. Watching what Griselda went through with Ursula Umbridge was enough to put me right off politics."

"Umbridge? Oh dear. You're referring to that kerfluffle with the subversive gnomes?"

"Goblins, actually. But can you imagine? Griselda? I'm not against a little subversion now and again, and the goblins are always good in a fight, but..." Galatea rolled her eyes. "Subversive goblin groups. Honestly!"

"What did the Umbridge woman say they were subverting against?"

"She didn't, of course. Scandal need not contain the seeds of truth."

"How right you are, my dear." He glanced at the clock, and his eyes darkened with disappointment. Their appointment was nearly over. "Well, I wish you nothing but happiness. And if you ever do decide you'd like to teach again, please don't hesitate to send an owl." Dippet reached across the desk that separated them and grasped Galatea's hands. "You'll always be welcome at Hogwarts."

"Thank you, Headmaster," Galatea said, lightly squeezing his hands. "I think, however, after all the excitement of the past seventy years that I'm rather looking forward to what the next seventy will hold."

"With Griselda by your side?"

"Always."


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(Anonymous)
2012-04-24 06:10 pm UTC (link)
*Wow*, a powerful back-story for the teachers of the first-war-era. Thank you so much, that was a great read!
Minervas_Eule

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[info]chantefable
2012-04-24 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Dear author,

As soon as I began reading, I was transported into a brilliant world of lightning-quick world of action and dazzling competence. The immediacy and depth of the plot, the fluid, rich language and the wonderfully built, appealing characters made this story deliciously engaging.

Griselda & Galatea were a dashing, dynamic, delightful leading couple, admirable ladies who made me feel personally involved and keen on knowing about their life, love & adventures. (Please accept a bouquet of virtual flowers for mentioning the 'subversive goblin groups'! ♥)

More than that, the appearance of Silvanus Kettleburn made me do a little dance of joy. It was a great spin on his biography & career. I loved the backstory you introduced. Go Silvanus! \o/

It was fascinating to read about the Grindelwald war. This period in canon has so much to offer, and I was full of joy to discover this fic explored it. The world-building and the details were incredibly interesting. The subtle foreshadowing of the wars to come even as this one is unfolding (Myrtle dying off-sceen) added another dimension to this already complex & captivating fic. The fact that Galatea taught Dumbledore everything he knows was awesome as well. To Dippet & Merrythought, the finally sung heroes of the war!

I was particularly excited about the manticores. I'm actually an ardent admirer of Potterverse manticores. The manticore preserve was the cherry on the pie, really.

And the clever narrative twist, the ending sentiment of Griselda's mirroring that of Harry's at the end of DH, was excellent.

All in all, this story featured all the loveliness I adore and went beyond what I allowed myself to hope for even in my most daring moments. Thank you very much for this beautiful, spectacular gift!

♥

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[info]schemingreader
2012-04-24 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Wow, that was neat! I loved seeing Griselda Marchbanks in her prime, and I love it that her prime was already pretty old! I looked up Kettleburn--I remembered that he was a minor character but nothing about him--and I adore this backstory you created for him! Wonderful.

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[info]wwmrsweasleydo
2012-04-24 06:59 pm UTC (link)
I love to read about minor characters, and with some of these I had to sit back for a moment and recollect who they were every so often. This is an under explored era and certainly an under explored generation. What wonderful, feisty old women: the very best kind! I really enjoyed reading this.

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[info]shadowycat
2012-04-24 09:19 pm UTC (link)
What a wonderful glimpse into the time of the War with Grindelwald. I thoroughly enjoyed it and would have loved to have read more. :D

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[info]atdelphi
2012-04-24 11:29 pm UTC (link)
! I had a feeling when I first clicked on the story link that I was going to love it, and I wasn't disappointed. Griselda and Galatea are wonderfully realized here - engaging and delightful - and I was ridiculously pleased to see Silvanus Kettleburn show up. Excellent world-building and historical detail in so compact a story. Marvellously done, Mystery Author!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2012-04-24 11:48 pm UTC (link)
Enjoyed this!

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[info]snapesgirl
2012-04-25 01:17 am UTC (link)
This is fantastic. I love seeing a bit of the war against Grindelwald

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[info]tetleythesecond
2012-04-25 07:49 am UTC (link)
Ooooh, I've wanted to read more Galatea Merrythought fic for ages (I think I've only seen one before), and what a great take on her and Griselda you give us here! Kick-arse fighting women who know what they do and what they want – I love it. The dialogue is awesome, and the whole story excellently-paced and vividly-told. Also, the last two lines made me sigh with happiness.

One bit I especially love is this exchange – a beautiful mix of wisdom and humour:

"When you reach a certain age, and you stand before a classroom of teenagers who barely know the business end of a wand from its grip, though... They start to give you a look. It's less about boredom and more about pity. They look at you and no longer see you as a pool of knowledge from which they might drink. They simply see you as old and slow and beyond your prime."

"Did they injure your feelings?"

Galatea slapped Griselda with the wash cloth. "Shut it, you."


Age has its benefits, indeed! ♥



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[info]pale_moonlight
2012-04-25 10:25 am UTC (link)
An action flick! With two strong women in the leading roles. Two older strong women. And when I thought it couldn't possibly get better, you give us this wonderful cameo of Silvanus Kettleburn. Your story is a perfect example of why Beholder is my favorite fest. Brilliant!

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[info]songquake
2012-04-26 01:04 am UTC (link)
Oh! This is so sweet. But more than that, I ADORE your portrait of gritty, competent women in the Grindelwald War, and the way you tied it into the Muggle historical context as well.

And the matter-of-fact tenderness between Galatea and Griselda is so touching.

Brava, Mystery Author!

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[info]therealsnape
2012-04-26 02:06 pm UTC (link)
"Trinkets, she calls them," Galatea muttered, the sound washed away by the explosions taking place around her. "See if I save her sorry arse." Right from that first line I knew I'd love your Galatea. She's such a wonderful match with clever Griselda Marchbanks.

And a perfect action scene, and the manticore preserve is inspired.

"Hush, my love. You'll scare the manticore handlers." Grin. Such a perfect Griselda line.

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[info]snapelike
2012-04-27 08:07 pm UTC (link)
This was simply running like the perfect action movie. Great characters, drama and interesting back-story.

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[info]woldy
2012-04-28 03:26 am UTC (link)
Lovely! I hadn't considered this pairing, but it's always great to hear more about Griselda and I enjoyed the account of Galatea. The fight scenes were great, and I enjoyed how you wove Kettleburn into the narrative too.

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[info]magnetic_pole
2012-04-28 09:40 pm UTC (link)
Fun! I love the backstory for these characters and the mix of sly wit and humor that are here:

Hundreds of students passed through my classes. I can't take credit for everything they do or have done."

"We're alone, my dear; of course you can."


Hee! Great fic. M.

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[info]squibstress
2012-04-29 03:03 am UTC (link)
I'm in love with your Galatea Merrythought (but I don't think I'll fight Griselda for her.)

So many great things in this fic, starting with the BAMF witches. And the observations of the attitudes of the young toward the old are spot-on, sad and somehow reassuring in their unchanging nearsightedness.

Loved the Kettleburn backstory, of course, and the cameo by another troublesome Umbridge.

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[info]katmarajade
2012-04-29 02:37 pm UTC (link)
Wow, this was an incredible read! Action, adventure, dangerous battles, awesome tricks and escapes, romance, wit, sadness, joy, memories of youth ... it's got it all! Both characters were fantastically realized and I loved their grit, determination, and loyalty and how their differences complemented each other so well. The Kettleburn cameo was brilliant and yay for Dippet! That conversation was all aces. Amazing to see the people behind the characters we know. And I loved particularly Galatea's wry and so very real observations about youth, her end of teaching, and how the world sees her. The kiddos might not get it, but the woman's still got GAME. BAMF!witches ftw!

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[info]pauraque.dreamwidth.org
2012-05-01 06:16 pm UTC (link)
Damn, this is cool! Badass queer women fighting evil! The first war has never been so awesome. My hat's off to you, mystery author.

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[info]kelly_chambliss
2012-05-10 12:10 am UTC (link)
I can't tell you how excited I was to see this pairing, and your presentation of it didn't disappoint. Kick-ass older women who are bright, sexual, funny, and caring: I love it. Both of them are so nicely-characterized, and I like the way you balance action with quieter moments, all of them character-driven. I particularly enjoyed the references to pre-canon backstory (and now I want to see G & G take on Ursula Umbridge!)

"'Old' and 'without use' are not synonymous
You said it, Galatea. The wisdom and experience of both of them shines through.

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[info]albalark
2012-05-13 06:56 am UTC (link)
::points to icon:: This is wonderful!! I love how we jump into the story right in the middle of some gripping action and an obviously long-term loving relationship between the two indomitable witches at its heart. Your deft hand with humor conveys all we need to know about these two and how they have each other's back (literally! ::g::). They tease and banter and nurture each other by turns as all of the best of devoted partners do; you can tell that it's the everyday currency of their relationship.

The backstory you create for Kettleburn is harrowing and I liked the interaction with Dippet. He's made to seem rather ineffectual in canon, and he's a much more interesting individual in your hands. Your Galatea rocks ('Old' and 'without use' are not synonymous, indeed!)- she and Griselda are fortunate to have one another. :-) Fantastic work Mystery Author!

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