Oh, my dearest, dearest mystery author! I am reading and I am SO TORN, because I want to hurry up and find out what happens next, and I want to drag it out and savour every line of this fic, every delicious image (!) (I love what you did there!). This is like cake, absolute delight, and I'm so pleasantly excited and enjoying every morsel. I just cannot tell you how absolutely, honestly, completely WONDERFUL I think this is - it's an entire universe, a whole new wizarding world spreading here.
It's a world full of wizards, it's JKR expanded and enhanced, and every character is so mind-blowingly rich. I am hunting for clues, I have no idea what's going to happen, but oh, THE PLOT! There are Things! It's like I'm reliving the excitement of reading HP for the first time, because you have CREATED A WORLD.
And the manner, the style you chose for this? Totally makes me think of Alexandre Dumas. Roman-feuilleton style FTW! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! This is like a Dumas reimagining of Potterverse, with Epic Adventures and Romance! With a meta-dash of Perez-Reverte! Dear mystery author, how are you so awesome and talented, I love you to pieces. ♥