Oh my goodness! Thank you so much!! This is lush and thought provoking. I love the set up of the Friar's life in the middle ages (the first section is particularly lovely and gentle), but I REALLY fell for your writing when he becomes a ghost. I think my favorite passages are "As the Night Unfolds" through "Eternal Commitment" just for the amount of amazing feeling and story you fit into these brief lines.
Thank you so much, mystery writer! I really appreciate your gift for me!