Wow, this was fantastically creepy. Umbridge isn't evil so much as she's just sick and twisted, and you have portrayed that remarkably well here. Is it possible to feel sorry for a magical eyeball, 'cause I'm sure feeling that way right now? And one of the creepiest bits that you slipped in here is how she got off on Harry's pain in using the Blood Quill. She's definitely a nasty, much-too-saccharine-sweet, pink little bitch. We all love to hate her. ;)