This story is sweet and touching. I love the idea of magical Daisy Dursley -- and the magical kindergarten, too. I like your strong, sturdy Milly with her Dutch-doll bob, and I have to say, it's about time that Hogwarts hired some help for Madam Pomfrey! Being a nurse seems perfect for Millicent. Gruff, well-meaning Dudley is nicely-characterized, too.