Oh! Mystery author, this is wonderful! I love it! Dudley and Millicent are two of my favorite characters in this exchange and I love that you've paired them together. Your Dudley is wondeful. I think you've given him a really plausible history and made him into a character who's absolutely believable. Millicent is lovely, too. She's so confident and sure of herself but still able to relate to being not accepted by others. I love the way you've expanded the universe we see in the books. Its great to see Dudley's daughter getting the chance that Harry didn't as a magical child. Thank you so so much!!