I read this story about three days ago (three very, very busy days) and am only now getting to commenting, but it's stayed with me that whole time. Unfortunately, I'm now going to be repeating a lot of what's already been said, because I also adore what a sympathetic, three-dimensional portrait you've created of everyone in this story: particularly Ginny, who gets to be her own woman instead of "the wife," and Greg, who is pretty wise when you consider that he and Millicent could just as easily have ended up in Harry and Ginny's predicament if he'd been more insistent. And sex scenes for me are usually just something getting in the way of the plot, but these sex scenes? Wow. Fantastic job.