WOW. I can't remember the last time I read a fic that seemed to go by so fast and seemed so natural. The details were perfectly in place and just enough to really make everything seem as if it was being described as it was happening.
I really enjoyed the progression of them getting closer, and the fact everything wasn't just perfect after Vernon left. I liked how giggly they were together, and then how silent they were, and how hopeful the end seems.