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All of this is why you hate her, all of this is why you want her, two sides of an old wound that keeps nagging, burning, deep beneath your skin. Wow. Great line, and the whole story is so utterly believable.
Second person POV is so difficult to do right, but it can be such a triumph when done well - this is marvellous.

Hooch -- you taste the word, make a face, spit it out. Another great line. And the reason for the pink frills, the use of the word deviant: it's brilliant.

Marvellous story!

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