I DID NOT THINK IT COULD BE DONE, but you have made me love Marjorie Dursley. Honestly, she was one of those I thought I'd just never love and never see in a good light. Props to you for this adventurous try at fic. You succeeded.
I was really touched by the little details and the subtle way they hinted at liking each other. I loved the juxtaposition of the two relationships, the old and the young, the relationship with the "proper" distance and the one where the girls had fallen for each other.
This honestly made me want to make out with a Hogwarts ghost....
Also, Lickfold lol.
I love Umbridge's reaction to things, especially like Harry's room, Harry not being in the photo, and what she thought of the killing of the disfigured pup.