Your Millicent is bold and brash and unbelievably funny. I loved her feuds with Percy and Kingsley. She also had a great determination to be herself and absolute confidence in the knowledge that the person she is is amazing.
I loved the way Viktor got riled up around Millie and how he finally seemed to get some confidence in himself at the end (though he was still suitably respectful of her right hook).
This was literally laugh out loud funny all the way through, and if I had to pick out my favourite lines I'd probably be re-writing the whole story, but I have to mention this one: "Did you know you walk like a duck?"
"Did you know you fly like an owl trying to commit suicide?" because my partner ended up having to ask me what I was laughing at since I was interrupting the movie he was watching!
This was amazing, Mystery Author! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
I'm also sorry it took so long to comment - I was away from the internet for a couple of days and missed this when I got back!