Wonderful atmosphere and imagining. I confess, I'm not sharp enough on the HP timeline to have figured out everything going on here, but your creation of a worshipful, self-abnegating Dawlish stands on its own. The whole story gave me claustrophobia and made me sad for this poor little man. And you did it without explicit pron! What an accomplishment. This gets a bunch of stars for creativity and execution.
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