John Dawlish is almost a two dimensional caricature in canon, rather than the fleshed-out three dimensional character in this story. You created some beautiful gorgeous moments here that will live with me for a while: the carvings of Merlin that are worn-down from people touching them, and the way that Dawlish goes back to the fountain that was and tries to find the glasses which aren't there any longer.
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