Oh my! This was really fabulous! I loved Millicent here and the idea of her as a dressmaker rather like The House of Eliott was so charming. I could totally imagine her doing beautiful designs in secret while she's under Madam Malkin's thumb. It was wonderful seeing Hermione and Millicent meet again and how Hermione fell for Millicent and influenced her decision to finally start out on her own. The relationship between the two was really sweet!
I also LOVED the side Snarry, Viktor (yay, Viktor!) as Millicent's friend, and Ron's shyness and feelings towards Pansy. I especially loved the mirror scene with Ron and the ending. Really beautifully done! :D