This is an awesome fic in a lot of ways, but the aspect that really floored me was the desciption of bodies. Most of the time, when people try to write smut with fat characters, they make them something along the lines of "surprisingly solid" or really muscled under a layer of fat. Not you. You embrace that some people are fat, and fat is soft and squishy, and fat people have sex, and that their sex is different (I loved him moving aside his stomache), but not bad. Piers paying attention to his breasts, clutching around his soft sides, watching his stomache, these are things you almost never see in any sort of writing. Good job and amazing fic!
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