Scarlet (![[info]](https://www.insanejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} ships_harry) wrote in ![[info]](https://www.insanejournal.com/img/community.gif){kind=small} hp_beholder, |
I particularly like that you kept Dudley fat, but gave his body such wonderfully erotic attention. The two of them were appealing as hell, though that was mainly to do with their interaction and characterisation. Piers, running himself tired and the only one who could notice that Dudley was gone, and missing him so much <3. They were such boys, though. A bit vulnerable and warm with each other, but not all hearts and flowers about it. It really felt like they were mates first and something else had come from that too.