So well-done, a triumph of technique and insight into character. You replicate the drugged/confunded state of mind so well and show that the Carrows aren't the only forms of monstrousness around. Dawlish's arrogance is well-drawn, as is the nature of his attraction/obsession to what Alecto represents to him. It's a very believable picture of him and his situation. It is a nightmare, and you make us feel it.