Lurvely creation of an overall image, some of those hundred reasons and thousand explanation coming together into such a full impression of Millicent and of Pansy and Millicent's relationship. Much a fan of the way you've sprinkled particular details and actions among the wash of sensory descriptions (and perhaps-likely "wash" isn't the best of terms, for 'tis a verrah lovely stream of sense and impression you've woven); jumping to the clothes falling to the floor, for instance. Creating obviously complex, quite intriguing characters, here... And-yes. Creates and leaves a sort of dizzying tone; most excellent, yo.