One of the things I like the most about this fic is the way you describe Abraxas' and Lucius' relationship. It is of course slightly crack-ish, but Abraxas' presence in Lucius' life adds an interesting angle to one of my favourite characters. It is not just good, it's brilliant. The dynamics between them provide a new way to see Lucius, and I really like what comes out of it.
Of course the almost-business-relationship between Percy and Abraxas is the crown of this. Funny and with so many hilarious situations, you still manage to stay close to the canon Percy and to develop a believable Abraxas - I think quite a few middle-aged men are acting the same way that he does (although they end up with sportscars, motorcycles and the blonde from the office...)
Percy's and Abraxas' relationship is believable. Abraxas' Slytherin method of deduction works well within the frame of the Marriage Law challenge, and Percy's cauldron-bottom-measuring correctness makes it quite a different way of courting - and no less entertaining. :D Also, the way they slip from love-making or comfort into business and finance is so perfectly them - and as mentioned above, the "arousal by financial news" was an invention of pure brilliance.
There are so many things I love in this fic. First of all, I love, love, love how you took my absolute hatred of the habit of pasting all sorts of non-canon names to characters. Poor Abraxas - he really tries his best. I particularly like how Percy is not letting his husband-to-be get away with it: it shows a Percy like he should be: not a push-over at all.
Together with the humour, I like the serious Abraxas in this - the way he stands up for Percy, supporting him against Molly and Lucius - there is no doubt that Percy will be cherished, and at some point perhaps loved dearly.
I adore you, dear writer, for managing to use so many of the things I like for little details that adds to the fic: Severus/Lucius (and perhaps /Narcissa) on the side, Severus marrying Krum, the inspection scene (Guh!), almost all my favourite characters are mentioned or get a cameo in this wonderful fic.
As for the humour, Abraxas' nude Quidditch-threat is just the most hilarious thing ever; it cracked my up totally. The peacocks, Abraxas' revenge on Lucius for the many times he's walked in on him... I could go on.
I'm sure I'll go back and reread this fic many times. Thank you for writing this for me - there is do doubt how much care you have taken to include my wishes, and the result was so very enjoyable.