Oh, I just love this sort of thing -- the story behind-the-scenes -- and you've done it so well. I especially like the early relationship, for I suspect that Minerva would be one to keep a part of herself always in judgement of her partner, never to give her heart completely -- even apart from the object's worthiness. And the pull between Rufus and Albus, and the gradually sapping of love and respect from the love affair, all so beautifully done. Great job.