I really enjoyed this. Moody is one of my favorite characters, and (thanks to this year's Beholder), Krum is rapidly becoming so. I like the believable way you bring them together, the clever details about how Moody's eye works, and the way you present Viktor's language. Moody's voice is perfect; I loved IC lines like this: It didn't matter, of course; he was decades past being shy about his body, and anyone who was disgusted was welcome to fuck right off and the insights in lines like this: Perhaps it was like soft butter on hot fresh bread, sinking into the flesh of it until it was indistinguishable, and therefore not able to be separately described.