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This was a really great read. Like with other well thought out stories, some of my favourite parts were those on the outskirts of the story, like Dumbledore's treatment of Sybill and how Snape sees right through it. Snape and Sybill's somewhat unique, casual relationship fit them very well - from what we know through Harry's eyes we'd think she'd be one to fall immediately and completely and cling to her beau, but you've taken those details and fleshed her out into a stronger person.