Great story, each character is so three-dimensional, and yet completely IC. "I thought we were still the young." Molly let her head fall heavily onto his shoulder. Such a great line for Molly,
"Perhaps someone could tell me why these...these...why this room suddenly looks like my office on a Saturday morning for the past seven years," Grin.
He didn't know that you can love someone and hate them at the same time. I think that's something important to know." I love your Arabella - and I really feel for her.
It had been so long since she had felt anything good that was this sharp and real. And Gussie, too!