I liked this so much. I was ready to just skim, but quickly got drawn in and just sat and basked in the story and the characters. I especially like the comparisons between Muggle and Wizarding worlds, and how we get to see each side viewing the other both from the outside and the inside. I think what especially impressed me is that you seem to have created a much richer world than what is actually stated. From Petunia's panic attack to the complicated relationship between Dudley and his father, to Ron and Pansy's relationship, not to mention Harry and Dean's, there is such a richness here just under the surface, and yet you don't let that all distract from your main story. Really well done, bravo.