This fic really resonates with me, mostly because of your characterization of Millicent. I also love the brief glimpse of the relationship among Draco, Pansy, Greg, & Millicent; Millicent seeing the potential for her own beauty and relationship in Sinistra and McGonagall; and that Millicent is wonderfully, painfully human, with flaws and self-doubts and a temper, but she has (or, perhaps, discovers that she has) integrity. Beautiful!