“It looks like tea, you know. Salty, oily tea.” You really have a knack for dialogue.
“See anything you like?” His voice cracked. This kills me. I didn't expect that. Which makes sense; he's not a man you know what to expect with. You can't really predict his thought process.
YES OMG. Minerva just compared his cock to a quidditch bat. Holy crap.
This was really nice. I loved the mention of how their relationship started. This is a really nice snapshot of their relationship together.