Oh, oh, this is fantastic! You sucked me in immediately with your compelling writing, and I had to stay up until 5:30 am reading because I refused to stop in the middle.
I love all the background and build up you gave this story rather than just throwing Viktor and Harry together right off the bat. The story unfolds in its own time, flowing and unrushed. All the detail you put into your writing is just incredible.
Viktor's voice is so strong here, his unique personality is crystal clear throughout. All of your characterizations are wonderful; every character in your story feels fully-fleshed and real -- even those who died before it begins.
Also, I gotta say, I'm lucky the sex didn't melt my monitor. Yes.