(I suppose it would've helped if I had hit 'Post Comment.' Oy.) Even without my name at the top, I would have known this fic was for me. Thank you! I'm glad you tackled these characters and the situation so unflinchingly. I always feel like I'm taking a risk when I throw ideas like that out there, because there are a lot of ways to develop it that I'd rather not see, but I really like the direction you took. I love the three of them living together and trying to make a go of having a halfway decent life despite everything being stacked against them. Their personalities are developed distinctly, and it was nice to see them given some emotional range. (And the liberal Snape references are appreciated.)
I picture Millie especially as someone who learned to internalize things and be cautious in what she says. I can see this coming out in your fic, and I think it rings true.
"Do you know how beautiful you are when you're angry?" Lovely. Beauty not only comes in all shapes and sizes, but in all moods and tempers, as well.
I also appreciate your not shying away from their physicality, and the ending is just what I'd hoped for. I've gotten my hurt/comfort and rarepair fixes for the day all in one. Thank you so much!!!