I adore the relationships you've set up here between Millie and the other characters. The romance with Vince is sweet and honest, her memories of her father are touching, and her interactions with Greg - especially the ending - make me smile. I also applaud you for managing to resurrect characters without shying away from the nasty aftermath of the war, even confronting a few points JKR glossed over (lousy wizarding mental health care and abuse of Unforgivables indeed). Great job!