"Yes. I like when your blood is moving a bit. Especially when it moves into this area." Filius chuckled when Severus jumped, then rolled closer and nuzzled at his chest.
For some reason, these lines just touched me so much -- the playfulness, the flirting, the tenderness depicted in so few words... But the whole story is gorgeous: your characters are so compelling (especially Flitwick -- I love what you've done with him here!) and I adore the fact that you managed to create an ending that was both hopeful/happy and canon-compliant. Amazing!