Wow, this was just wonderful. I freely admit I'm biased because I adore Neville and I have a very soft spot in my heart for Millicent as well -- I think she gets a lot of unfair treatment because she's a big, brusque girl rather than some sort of femme fatale. So this story was just perfect. You really got Neville and Millicent down to a tee, their romance was believably and brilliantly built up, and Neville's friends (except for Luna) all need to be kicked in the shins (yay Ron).