This was so real and sweet. Little snapshots of their dynamic. I love the pairing very much. It's not one I'd ever thought of before, and I love thinking up rare pairings. ;-)
Also, I'd like to point out the part about the marks on their stomachs. I'm only 19, but I've had stretchmarks on my stomach since I was about 12, and I was very thin back then. They used to embarrass me when I was younger. Of course, now I call them my zebra stripes. So glad you included them being loved for their bodies, accepting the beauty of their age. I can't wait to get older, honestly.
What a great little story. And very hot too! Thank you very much, mystery author.