Thank you so much! I'm finally back to respond! I really appreciate your comment. You picked a line I really like myself. :) On your last question: The narrator is meant to be a demon of chaos, basically an evil spirit assigned to the Dumbledores to cause trouble...I hoped that I was able to introduce him well enough in the second little section of the fic, so I'm sorry that did not turn out to be clear for you. :( That is good feedback to have!