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alisanne (alisanne) wrote in hp_beholder,

What a incredible, epic tale you wove here, MA!
The world building, the details about the Ministry and the WW you included, and the interpersonal relationships all read very true for that world and more than canon compliant, TBH. Very impressive.
I especially enjoyed the way you conveyed Moody's guilt and the way it overlapped with Albus'.
I enjoyed this a lot. :)
Great job!

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