Pomona is one of my favorite characters, so I'm always glad to see her in a long, interesting story like this. It's a charming romance edged with all the real pain of long lives spent in sometimes terrible circumstances. I like the personalities you've given Garrick and Pomona -- they are clearly their canon selves, yet so much more. You've created a full life for each of them, and I really enjoyed all the other canon cameos, too. The time shifts give an interesting perspective. And I'm glad for Neville and Viktor, too.