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dexstarr (dexstarr) wrote in hp_beholder,

I apologize for not leaving feedback earlier - it wasn't because I didn't love the fic, because I do! This story deserves a bucket of comments.

I've been wanting to read a fic about Emmeline foreeever. I don't have any real headcanon for her, but now I'm sure your image of her, as well as that of Amelia, will figure into how I imagine both in the future.

I adored how their relationship developed, and I was so sad that they had to keep it secret for so long. They both deserved much better. *shakes fist at turbulent times* So I really liked how you ended the story, with that bit of hope and showing that they did have some happiness spending more time together, before the end.

I also really liked the eulogies; they added a lot to the fic. Neville's was my favorite, especially this bit: “She was the one who took me to see my mother and father at St. Mungos. She taught me not to be afraid of them, however strange or still they might be, but to talk to them as if they were really there, like in all the stories I knew. She gave me back my mum and dad.” I could just see Amelia doing that.

Thank you. This is a lovely fic, and I'm sure I'll find new favorite tidbits every time I read it.