The premise here is so clever, and I love what you did with both characters, who are both recognizably themselves and yet much more fleshed out. Ollivander's bravery in facing the dragon was really well done, as was your portrayal of Peter's doubts. It made them both more sympathetic than in canon, I think, and by the end I was sort of glad they managed to get this nice respite from ugly reality. Well done!