Oh! How absolutely charming! Thanks so much for this, Mystery author.
First, I love how unapologetically unpretty they both are here. How they both noticed each other before at Hogwarts and how matter-of-fact and up front they were about their attraction now that they're adults. I also really liked seeing the way Viktor's determination tempered with his shyness, and the way Millicent came out of her shell to blossom under his clearly sincere admiration. :) The scene in the restaurant with the 'ugly couple' was well done, as was the sweetly awkward and very realistically portrayed sex. And I even got a nice, hopeful ending!
Thank you so much for the lovely gift! I really enjoyed it a lot. :)