See how late I am reading this and commenting? But I said I would and I have been true to my word (finally).
I'm so glad that I read this when I had the time and space to really concentrate on it. It was such a valuable, satisfying read!
I hardly know where to begin with commenting. I suppose I should start off by saying that I love it.
Harry and Viktor's relationship was lovely, growing and developing naturally and gently as they both struggled with their adventure. i love what you did with all the other characters, too. Gaspar was a wonderful, mysterious invention.
I loved the post-war Darkness you created, and your ingenious use of Time Magic. Also, the time travel gave you the opportunity to show how detailed and exact your knowledge of canon is, as you slipped easily through the same time period as GoF.
A brilliant story well written. I had a brilliant time reading this.