Thank you so much! It's great that you pointed out that scene, as it was my favorite to write! I just love Dementors and how vicious they can be so I tried to go all out with it.
And oh, you have no idea how nervous I was when this got posted! I had no idea I was writing for you/ that you were pinchhitting until very late into the process so having you like it means a lot to me, as you obviously worked hard on your fic as well!