From Pyttan
Oh ... the kiss ... I wanted to get that right and it took me a while to figure out how Dudley would kiss Millicent. I think they will do well together too. I'm glad you liked they way I divided up the story. I wanted to be sure the POV was clear all they way through, and I prefer one POV per chapter when I read myself.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the story.