Wow, Dudders and Millie are fast movers! I love watching them assess each other and then consider their families' possible reactions. The parallel plots and povs work very well. I really like the voices in this story overall -- excellent characterizations -- and the opening scene with Vernon and Petunia is hilariously painful.
I'm charmed by the idea of Dudley and Millicent running a pub together.
he still felt like the time he'd had too much cotton-candy and pop-corn, and then screamed on the top of his lungs until his mum and dad had let him go on the Rotor. Haha! This is so Dudley. I feel queasy just thinking about it.