**flails madly** these are FABULOUS. and two artses??? I am so blessed!
the Snupin is gorgeous - the wicked trees looming, the enormous moon, and their expressions are wonderful. Lupin is like this tender, lusty monster. Severus is paralyzed with terror! But he haz such pretty pecs! it's terrific.
Now, for the Snaco: I am not a chibi fan, but this is so hysterical and filthy that its perfect. I agree with k8bnimble, it reminded me of something, and that's it! that ghastly schmoopy old comic "Love is..." The sound effects are amazing, the intructive panel is most helpful ("out... in''') and Draco's blush in the final panel is adorable.
only one thing: you are too good to draw for this fest next year. you must pick something you're not good at!