OOC
I know this thread was, like, a billion years ago, so I'll understand completely if you don't remember, but I figured it couldn't hurt to ask. What exactly was intense about this? I mean, I thought it was pretty intense, but when I'm writing from Snape's perspective, my reactions tend to be a bit skewed. *is a very empathic-type writing* I'm asking because Caro and I have serious ambitions of writing professionally, and we're always looking for feedback with regards to what works and what doesn't (she is already a published poet, the wanker), so we consider any feedback valuable. :-D